Today we made a rough 2 column storyboard of the opening 15 seconds of our music video. We then swapped this with another group and gave and received peer assessment and feedback. This is the feedback we received:
- Our terminology may not be understood by non-musicians so we should change it to suit the people reading it.
- We should put shot types on every shot we use.
- It was too detailed as 15 seconds was a whole page. It should be less detailed and less specific on every shot.
- At the moment it is all performance and the narrative is too unclear.
Although we understood this criticism and took it into account I don't think we're going to change anything to our 2 column storyboard or our idea. This is because our narrative fully arrives 20 seconds in and becomes clearer then. Also, we are the ones reading the storyboard so as long as we understand what we've wrote it is ok.
VIMA: D. PEG: C.
ReplyDeleteTo improve:
1. Add missing blog posts: questionnaires; analysis of research and how it has influenced your ideas; detailed explanation of narrative; logo / font design ideas; more secondary research (i.e. evidence that you have anlysed existing music videos).
2. Make sure each of these blog posts is anlytical, not descriptive.
- JL